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The first rescue

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when he's walking like he always does, he noticed that girl, he continued to walk but looked at her for a moment, she looked at him
and kept playing with her friends, so suffering left.

and when he came back in the town at night, to steal food, he looked at where mace was playing, she wasn't there any more,
he didn't react to it and took some food but he smelled blood, he follow the smell, and it was in the playground,
so he followed the smell and it brang him to a wagon.

there where a few adult's around it, and they where looking inside, and talking about what they where going  to with them, suffering was listening
and they talked about mobian traffic, suffering was kinda angry about what he heard, and one of the guys said
"I'll just take one for tonight, who knows when such a pretty girl will be here again"
so he entered in the wagon, and got out with the girl he saw earlier, she's crying and was injured,
suffering recognized her, and he's angry the guy took mace and went to the storage next to the wagon.

So suffering started to walk and act like a lost child, there was 3 guys outside.
they all saw him and they were all like, "good another easy prey" so they all began to walk towards him.
and of the guy knee down and say to suffering, "are you lost my boy? want we help you to find your parent?"
suffering said nothing and looked at the ground, One of the men said "come with me" he tried to take him in his arms
and suffering instanly made a little electric dagger, and put it right in the man's throat.

the 2 other guys are really surprised and take their guns, suffering removed his dagger and looked at them,
they starting shooting, but Suffering used his shield, the guy who had mace heard the gun shots.
the 2 guys are scared because they dont have ammo in their clip, and they try to reload
but suffering ran right at them and in 0.3 seconds the 2 guys had their throats cut
suffering had blood on his hand and his face, he was smiling, he enjoying it.

Suffering opened the wagon and all the girls and boys ran away, he entered in the storage.
there was few rooms, he looked in each of them, and in one of them there was the girl,
on the ground almost naked, so he entered in the room running toward her, he let his guard down.
right when he entered one of the men hit suffering on the head with a iron bar
he fell on the ground and droped his dagger,the man walked towards him furiusly and began to
kick him repetivly and then he took suffering by the throat and began to strangle him
to see him die,he was bleeding and wasn't able to use his electricity
Suffering was too weak, too injured.

the girl woke up, and she saw the man hurting suffering
she began to cry because she couldn't do anything to help him
and when she saw him taking suffering by his throat, she started to scream "let him go!"
the guy turned around and punched her, she fell on the ground, she was really dizzy
he said, "I'm not done with you! be more patient"
when she was on the ground, she saw suffering's dagger, she slowly picked it up,
she was shaking, The man was still strangeling suffering, suffering was almost dead
he wasn't moving anymore, and at that moment she stopped shacking, and ran towards the man screaming
the guy heard her and looked at her, she got the dagger right in the back.

The man was screaming of pain, he droped suffering on the ground
he was still alive.
the man punched mace again, she fell,
and he punched her continusly.
suffering got up, made appear his second dagger, and he jumped on the mans back
while holding the first dagger still on his back, he twisted it,and stabbed him
again and again, with rage.
and even when the man wasn't moving anymore, suffering continued stabbing, he didnt stop
the girl was crying, and she got up and hugged suffering in the back, screaming "STOP!"
she said it 3 times, before he decided to stop, his daggers disappeared
she was scared of him.

and then she passed out, suffering looked at mace on the ground,
she was still almost naked, so he took off his coat, and put it on her and cerried her
and began to walk away from this place.

a few moments later, she woke up for few seconds, she asked suffering
"where are we? who are you?"
suffering looked at her and he said "you are somewhere safe..... and my name is Suffering, what is yours?"
the girl looked at him for few seconds and she said "My name is... Mace"

and that's how they've met

- Story by Suffering23 ^^

I hope ya like it :la: x

Also in this story Suffering and Mace are 9 years old~

Suffering the wolf (c) :iconsuffering23:
Mace the cat (c) :icondetectivemar:
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PrivateDoomsday's avatar
This looks so adorable; awesome work!